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Ahad, 17 Januari 2010

okay time for a comic story!! *drum rolls.

the first book totally sucked. i like the second one so much better.



basically its all about this affair a student has with her teacher. she didn't know that he was her teacher when she liked him tapinya. so yeah, these books tell us about how they struggled and made sacrifices to maintain their relationship.

okay first chapter of the second book. *clears throat. Bismillah.

okay rules first. HAHAH if i type like "A : ..." ertinya A becakap. if i type "A thinks ..." ertinya ia becakap dalam hati. clear? okay. here goes.

characters : Kanae Miyakuni(Cik Muda and Eiji's Girlfriend), Eiji Morihara(Kanae's English Teacher and Her Boyfriend), Misato Onda(Kanae's Bestfriend), Kanae's mom and Kanae's Dad.

the first chapter of this book is actually the 4th chapter of both books.

CHAPTER 4

Hari Jadi Cik Muda.

Kanae thinks : "Sekarang ni aku tengah tunggu panggilan telefon."

Kanae remembers what Eiji said to her : "Awak mesti naik tren yang sama waktu dengan saya."

during that scene..

Kanae : "tapi.. mana saya tau tren awak pukul berapa. kenalah periksa dulu."

Eiji : "ah..yakah.."

Eiji looks at the ground shyly.

Eiji : "okaylah, malam ni saya call awak."

back to reality..

Kanae freaked out while slapping her pillow excitedly screaming, "KYAAA!!"

Kanae thinks : "Aku patut bersabar dan jangan cuba hubungi dia. jangan emel pun."

Kanae thinks again : "Ah..gembiranya aku! gembira sangat!"

suddenly her phone rang. she was startled.

it's an email from her dad.

[subject]
papa ni!

[body]
hari jadi kamu dah dekat kan? papa ada belikan hadiah untuk kamu tau. tak lama lagi bila papa balik ke jepun, nak makan besama tak nanti? minta izin mama dengan atuk dulu ya!

Kanae thinks : "Eh..? hari jadi aku ke?"

she looked at her calendar and realized that it IS her birthday.

she imagined her and Eiji on a dinner date which for her is likely not to come true.

Kanae thinks : "tapi.. tu kan hari jadi aku. aku nak kami celebrate bersama walaupun sekejap. boleh ke aku cakap kat dia camtu?"

"sebab hari tu hari jadi aku, aku nak habiskan masa berdua je dengan dia. walaupun sekejap..."

and she dozed off.

her phone rang again. this time, she hesitantly woke up with saliva coming out of her mouth.

Kanae : "helo..."

Eiji : "ah.. saya ni."

Kanae got alerted and sat up straight.

Eiji : "maaf, lambat call. ada kawan saya call pulak tadi."

Kanae : "tak.. takpelah. takpe."

Eiji : "oh ya, awak nak tau pasal masa perjalanan tren tu kan? tren saya akan sampai kat stesen awak pukul 7.45."

Kanae : "oh, okey. ya, saya akan naik tren yang tu."

Eiji : "..."

Kanae : "er..? kenapa ni?"

Eiji : "takde apa-apa la.. dah lama tak berbual dalam henfon."

Kanae's heart beat fastened.

Kanae thinks : "Hah, inilah peluang aku. cepat cakap pasal hari jadi tu! cakap juga pasal nak bersama dengan dia."

she struggled to find the courage to ask Eiji.

Kanae : "ahh.. err.."

Eiji interrupted her oh so stupid-ish moments.

Eiji : "h ya, cakap pasal dah lama ni.. tadi ada kawan dari lapangan ski call saya."

Kanae : "eh..?!"

Eiji : "dia kata nak datang sini masa cuti nanti."

Kanae froze.

Kanae : "err, dia cuti dari 29 hari bulan ke..?"

29th is her birthday.

Eiji : "ya, dari 29 hari bulan. diorang datang satu group.tak ramai, adalah dalam 4 orang.. *laughs*"

Kanae : "yakah......" while mourning over the fact that Eiji won't be there during her birthday.

they both hung up after saying goodbye and Kanae ended up depressed.

she decided to go downstairs instead.

Kanae thinks : "apa nak buat, kawan dia yang dah lama tak jumpa nak datang pulak.."

one of her maids : "Cik Muda Kanae. ada panggilan dari Tuan untuk Cik Muda."

Kanae : "Papa?"

she thinks : "papa dah emel, kata nak balik ke Jepun. tak sabarnya nak jumpa dia~"

Kanae's mom answered the phone before her : "tak payah la awak nak berlagak seperti papa dia sekarang. Kanae pun dah besar. dia takkan suka keluar makan dengan awak pada hari jadinya."

she hung up.

Kanae's parents have been divorced due to her father's lack of responsibility.

Kanae shouted : "MAMA!! panggilan dari papa, bukankah itu untuk saya?!"

her mom butted in without even listening to a word she said : "ah, Kanae. 29 haribulan nanti ama dengan atuk sibuk dengan kerja. tapi mama dah buat tempahan restoran pada 30 haribulan. kita sambut pada hari tu je pun takpe kan? hadiah pun mama bagi pada hari tu je la. kamu nak apa? orang tua tu asyik nak bagi kamu patung beruang je. selalu layan kamu macam budak kecik kan, Kanae?"

Kanae : "mama.. kan saya memang suka patung beruang?" she put a lot of stress onto the word 'kan'.

she ran back to her room, threw her pillow. she was mad. she would never understand her mother's attitude.

the next day.

"Stesen Umezono.. Stesen Umezono.."

Kanae entered the train while searching for Eiji. she spotted him and they smiled at each other. Kanae stayed at the other side while Eiji stayed at his side of the train. in front of Kanae was a man and his son. it reminded her of her dad and she put on a sad face after that. Eiji saw her expression and he couldn't help but wonder why she was sad.

on the 29th.

one of her maid came into her room : "Cik Muda Kanae. selamat harijadi! ada hadiah sampai untuk cik!"

it's a present from her dad. a limited edition teddy bear dressed up as a penguin. she tried to buy it last year but didn't have the time. there was also a letter from her dad asking her to come over to his hotel the next day (30th).

the next day.

she sneaked out of the house while her mom and grandfather were still not home just to meet her dad. it was night time when she sneaked out so you can imagine the horror. while walking, she heard footsteps following hers. she felt like someone's following her so she decided to run for it. she ran for her life and hid beside a trash can while placing her hand on her mouth so the follower won't be able to hear her breathing heavily. the follower was a dude. he passed by the trash can while looking around for Kanae. Kanae couldn't distinguish who he was so she got more scared. she called Eiji. after a few minutes, Eiji came.

Eiji : "Kanae!"

Kanae got startled and ran to him. she hugged him and he hugged her back, shyly.

Eiji : "awak okey ke?"

Kanae : "ya.."

Eiji : "mana orang yang ikut awak tu?!"

Kanae : "entah, mungkin dia dah pergi.. ma.. maaf sebab call awak masa kawan-kawan awak datang melawat.."

Eiji knocked her head and said : "saya yang bermasalah kalau awak tak call, tau tak! mereka cuma kawan biasa!!"

Kanae's face turned red as she tried to say thank you to him.

Eiji : "apa yang awak buat kat tempat macam ni malam-malam buta ni?? bahaya tau tak!"

Kanae explained to him about her birthday and about her meeting her dad. Eiji got shocked because he didn't know that yesterday was her birthday. Kanae tried to explain to him about the plans with her mom and grandfather and also her plans with her dad and the reason she sneaked out of the house. Eiji refused to accept it but tried to understand the whole divorce thing at the same time. Kanae told him that her dad will be leaving Japan again tomorrow so she only has today. Eiji understood but he wouldn't look at Kanae. Kanae thought that Eiji must've summed up all of her actions as selfish but she couldn't help it. she really wanted to see her dad.

Eiji asked her which hotel her dad is staying in and she said it's the Royal Blue hotel. Eiji got up and told Kanae that she should see her dad at that moment rather than stalling anymore longer until her mom and grandfather gets back home. Kanae asked Eiji if it was really okay because of his friends visit and stuff and Eiji reassured her that it was fine. Kanae felt relieved because all of her disappointments are starting to fade away and she really wanted to see her dad and tell him how much she loves Eiji.

at the hotel, Eiji asked Kanae if her dad was there. Kanae wasn't sure herself so she tried to call him while thinking of how much time she had left to see her dad. at 11 O clock she has to go back to her house. Eiji told her that as her teacher, he could cover her up for tomorrow's school day because he really wanted her to spend as much time as she could with her dad. Eiji said that he would wait outside of the hotel because people were staring at them but Kanae decided to wait outside with him as well. so they waited outside, Kanae was happy but Eiji was kinda annoyed because what the hell was she doing outside when she was supposed to be inside looking for her dad. when he turned his head to look at Kanae, at the same time Kanae turned hers. they stared into each other's eyes and slowly heading for a kiss when suddenly, Kanae's phone rang. it was her dad. Eiji got even more flustered. Kanae saw her dad and ran to him and Eiji tagged along. She hugged her dad. her dad giggled because she's just turned 18 and still she acts like a kid. her dad realized the presence of another person there and asked Kanae who Eiji was. Eiji introduced himself as Kanae's English teacher and not as her boyfriend. her dad looked surprised. she told her dad that she got there with Eiji's assistance. her dad bowed to Eiji, asking him to take care of her daughter for him. Eiji nodded.

on their way back home, Eiji told Kanae that he thinks that her dad knows what's going on between them. Kanae was so happy she didn't realize what he was talking about. then, remembering the fact that Kanae didn't tell him about her birthday, Eiji got mad again. he was mad because he couldn't do anything for her birthday. Kanae grabbed Eiji's hand softly and told him that she didn't want anything from him. just spending the day with him made her happy. she said that Eiji would always spend time with her and take care of her and that was THE BEST gift for her. Eiji's eyes went wide and he was speechless. his face went bright red but he tried to cover it with his other hand. Kanae asked him what was wrong.

Eiji : "awak ni.. memang.."

he pulled off Kanae's hat and kissed her. Kanae was shocked but then she indulged in the heavenly feeling of kissing.

Eiji hugged her tight and greeted her happy birthday.

Kanae thinks : "aku rasa bahagia.. aku rasa begitu bahagia hingga lupa segala-galanya. aku sangat bahagia"

OKAY SO THAT'S THE 4TH CHAPTER :D panjang ah. baik plang ku buat semua story form instead of mcm script atu. biar tia eh :p \

i hope you guys enjoyed it as much as i enjoyed reading the whole book. :)

and sorry about the grammar mistakes. i know that there are A LOT. tenses and stuff. but ngalih wah ku kan menggorect. HAHAHAHA.

Assalamualaikum.
Annyeong.
xx.

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